Code review comment for lp://staging/~julian-edwards/maas/releasenotes-1.6

The IP Addresses Overhaul section has a complete afterthought in parentheses. I would recommend making that a separate sentence. It can still be in parentheses, as long as the previous sentence clearly ends before the parenthetical text. Otherwise you're asking the reader to keep the whole thing in mind, just in case the original sentence resumes after the parenthetical remark.