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Tim McNamara
Project:
Ubuntu Documentation
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484. By Tim McNamara

Cleanup

Fixed UK English strings, moved <listitems> to independent sentences, removed contractions.

See https://code.launchpad.net/~tim-clicks/ubuntu-docs/minor2/+merge/21767/comments/55945

483. By Tim McNamara

Edited introductory paragraphs

Actions & justifications:

"New to Ubuntu?"
  Removed redundancy in "New to Ubuntu"?
    Appeared twice: once in header, then in first sentence
  Expanded the first sentance into listitems
    Attempted to use more of the page, so the contents didn't
    have such a visually dominating effect.

"Welcome to Ubuntu"
  Spread content out to two sentences
    There were two messages. One was about Ubuntu, the other
    was about getting new software. This commit provides a
    visual seperation, so that the messages are clearer.

482. By Tim McNamara

Largely cosmetic changes

Added the occasional comma. Discarded semi-colons in favour of new
sentences. Attempted to shorten sentences where beneficial.

Non-trivial changes:
  location - action - justification
  l 78 - deleted some text - Sounded a little too much like an advert.
  l 79 - removed 'update' - Not accurate
  l 87 - content changes - Provided some more specifics, used 'non-free'
                           over 'proprietary' because it's more accurate

481. By Connor Imes

Use default serverguide index.html file location for accessing serverguide in terminal, LP: #537167

480. By Connor Imes

Added mention of gsynaptics in hardware section, LP: #450567

479. By Connor Imes

Command line substitution for Services utility which is not in Karmic or Lucid, LP: #518460

478. By Connor Imes

Expanded on using config files for vpn connections in internet section

477. By Connor Imes

Additions to VPN section of internet connecting guide. Alex Wardle, LP: #452647

476. By Connor Imes

Split off directions for exporting favorites in IE8 in windows and switching sections. Broke different IE versions down into subsections, LP: #528808

475. By Connor Imes

Removed old string from Windows section and copied correct string to Switching guide, LP: #527905

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