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Please note that the steps this troubleshooting guide
should be
Please note that the steps in this troubleshooting guide
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The apt-line most probably is found on the repository website. I would rather change the wording on this to:
This is available from the website of the repository in the majority of cases ...
I'm fine with the original wording as well though.
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Please note that the steps this troubleshooting guide
should be
Please note that the steps in this troubleshooting guide
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The apt-line most probably is found on the repository website. I would rather change the wording on this to:
This is available from the website of the repository in the majority of cases ...
I'm fine with the original wording as well though.