Incremental diff (also reflected in the screenshots):

=== modified file 'lib/lp/translations/browser/pofile.py'
--- lib/lp/translations/browser/pofile.py	2009-09-01 11:41:42 +0000
+++ lib/lp/translations/browser/pofile.py	2009-09-02 06:32:33 +0000
@@ -248,23 +248,22 @@
 
     DEFAULT_BATCH_SIZE = 50
 
-    def page_title(self):
-        """See `LaunchpadView`."""
+    @property
+    def _person_name(self):
+        """Person's display name.  Graceful about unknown persons."""
         if self.person is None:
-            person_name = "unknown person"
+            return "unknown person"
         else:
-            person_name = self.person.displayname
+            return self.person.displayname
 
+    def page_title(self):
+        """See `LaunchpadView`."""
         return smartquote('Translations by %s in "%s"') % (
-            person_name, self.context.title)
+            self._person_name, self.context.title)
     
     def label(self):
         """See `LaunchpadView`."""
-        if self.person:
-            person_name = "unknown person"
-        else:
-            person_name = self.person.displayname
-        return "Translations by %s" % person_name
+        return "Translations by %s" % self._person_name
 
     def initialize(self):
         """See `LaunchpadView`."""

=== modified file 'lib/lp/translations/interfaces/translationrelicensingagreement.py'
--- lib/lp/translations/interfaces/translationrelicensingagreement.py	2009-09-01 14:59:04 +0000
+++ lib/lp/translations/interfaces/translationrelicensingagreement.py	2009-09-02 05:49:06 +0000
@@ -37,9 +37,9 @@
 
 
 class TranslationRelicensingAgreementOptions(EnumeratedType):
-    BSD = Item("licence all my translations in Launchpad "
-               "under the BSD licence.")
-    REMOVE = Item("not make translations in Launchpad.")
+    BSD = Item("License all my translations in Launchpad "
+               "under the BSD license.")
+    REMOVE = Item("Not make translations in Launchpad.")
 
 
 class ITranslationRelicensingAgreementEdit(ITranslationRelicensingAgreement):

=== modified file 'lib/lp/translations/templates/person-translations-relicensing.pt'
--- lib/lp/translations/templates/person-translations-relicensing.pt	2009-09-01 09:51:12 +0000
+++ lib/lp/translations/templates/person-translations-relicensing.pt	2009-09-02 05:47:03 +0000
@@ -17,12 +17,12 @@
         <p>
           To let the maximum number of projects benefit from this, we ask
           that you agree to <strong>license all your translations under the
-          <a href="https://help.launchpad.net/Legal/BSDLicense">BSD licence</a></strong>.
+          <a href="https://help.launchpad.net/Legal/BSDLicense">BSD license</a></strong>.
           If you change your mind later, you can return to this page
           (“Translations licensing”) at any time.
         </p>
         <p>
-          If you do not agree to the BSD licence, you will not be able
+          If you do not agree to the BSD license, you will not be able
           to make translations in Launchpad.
         </p>
         <p>

=== modified file 'lib/lp/translations/templates/person-translations.pt'
--- lib/lp/translations/templates/person-translations.pt	2009-09-01 08:37:31 +0000
+++ lib/lp/translations/templates/person-translations.pt	2009-09-02 05:16:31 +0000
@@ -147,8 +147,9 @@
                  tal:content="translator/style_guide_url"
                  tal:attributes="href translator/style_guide_url"
               >Documentation URL</a>
-            <a tal:attributes="href string:${translator/translationgroup/fmt:url}/${translator/language/code}/+edit"
-            ><img src="/@@/edit" /></a></td>
+            <a class="edit sprite"
+               tal:attributes="href string:${translator/translationgroup/fmt:url}/${translator/language/code}/+edit"
+            ><span class="invisible-link">edit</span></a></td>
         </tr>
       </tbody>
     </table>

=== modified file 'lib/lp/translations/templates/pofile-filter.pt'
--- lib/lp/translations/templates/pofile-filter.pt	2009-09-01 10:56:28 +0000
+++ lib/lp/translations/templates/pofile-filter.pt	2009-09-02 06:53:07 +0000
@@ -33,7 +33,8 @@
     <tal:translations condition="messages">
       <p tal:condition="view/person">
         <a tal:replace="structure view/person/fmt:link"/> has
-        submitted the following strings to this translation.
+        submitted the following strings to 
+        <a tal:attributes="href view/context/fmt:url">this translation</a>.
         Contributions are visually coded:
         <span class="usedtranslation">currently used translations</span>,
         <span>unreviewed suggestions</span>,
@@ -81,7 +82,6 @@
 
       </tal:translations>
     </tal:block>
-    <tal:menu replace="structure context/@@+related-pages" />
     </div>
   </body>
 </html>

=== modified file 'lib/lp/translations/templates/translation-import-queue-macros.pt'
--- lib/lp/translations/templates/translation-import-queue-macros.pt	2009-09-01 09:51:12 +0000
+++ lib/lp/translations/templates/translation-import-queue-macros.pt	2009-09-02 05:15:01 +0000
@@ -81,10 +81,10 @@
                     # __len__ method returns 0.
                   </tal:XXX>
                   <td tal:condition="entry/import_into/title|nothing" rowspan="3">
-                    <img alt="" src="/@@/download" />
+                    <span class="download sprite"></span>
                   </td>
                   <td tal:condition="not: entry/import_into/title|nothing" rowspan="2">
-                    <img alt="" src="/@@/download" />
+                    <span class="download sprite"></span>
                   </td>
                   <td>
                     <a tal:attributes="href entry/content/http_url"
@@ -105,8 +105,8 @@
                   </td>
                   <td>
                     <tal:block condition="entry/required:launchpad.Admin">
-                      <a tal:attributes="href entry/fmt:url">
-                        <img src="/@@/edit" title="Change this entry" />
+                      <a class="sprite edit" tal:attributes="href entry/fmt:url">
+                        <span class="invisible-link">Change this entry</span>
                       </a>
                     </tal:block>
                   </td>